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Post by Lady Erica on Mar 24, 2004 13:56:01 GMT -5
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Can you hear me? This is me. Theres no one else i'd rather be. In the night, i dream of you And your sweet touch, gets me through.
Can you see me? This is i For i am here untill i die. I'm traped inside, with no one there Would you help me? And would you care?
And now you came, in the night, When i'm asleep, in sight. You took my hand, and led me out, So i am free, to be me.
Forever more, i'm still here, Watching over, you my dear.
By, Lady Erica ( Or Erica-mun. Hope you like! )
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Post by LadyGelinaGrey on Mar 24, 2004 16:40:35 GMT -5
Very nice...
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Post by Cherise on Mar 28, 2004 10:42:25 GMT -5
OO;; I luff this poem.. So simple, yet I can so relate to it. - steals the poem and runs - Muwaha!
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Post by Kolava on Mar 28, 2004 15:05:15 GMT -5
I agree that it is a good poem, but the third stanza needs work and it has some mechanical flaws.
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Post by LadyGelinaGrey on Mar 28, 2004 18:47:28 GMT -5
Only you Kolava...only you... :: pets her furball ::
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Post by Cherise on Mar 29, 2004 20:35:30 GMT -5
- approaches the stage - I have a poem. Ahem. - uncrumples a piece of paper. adjust mic. sings her poem. - The best time to wear a striped sweaaaater.. Is all the tiiiiiime.. One with, a turtle neeeeck.. La la la.. ... I dedicate this song to Lina, the love of my life. ;__; Thank you for being such a great inspiration.
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