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Post by jaysoncesta on Apr 25, 2004 22:11:49 GMT -5
::in the shadows of the dark forest and laying by a small brooke was a child in black mage robes crying he slowly looked around with his extremely blood shot violet hues he thought he heard something but it was only him as he calmed down for a moment running his fingers thorugh his spiked up black hair thinking of something of his past he started to cry again:: damn those humans...they took everything away from me...my father, my mother...and if it wasnt for them i wouldn't have been like this... :: tears of sadness and anger rolled down his cheeks:: i am weak...i let what little friends i have down and im surprised they havent left me in the gutter.... ::he then wiped the tears from his eyes:: if people wanted to know why i was so sad, so lonely and why no one will ever talk to me ::he then looked at his reflection through the brooke:: it because im a plae freak thats why because i am strange thats why people never talk to me because they are afraid of something they dont understand.... ::he would the lay down and cry once more after few hours he will be ok but deep inside he will always feel this way until some special comes along and whispers in his ear that they love him..but that he thought was a hopeless dream::
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Post by Kolava on Apr 25, 2004 22:16:31 GMT -5
At first glance, I didn't like this. Then I read it, and I found it was actually relatively good--good enough to excuse the purple font.
Pale, despondent mages in black robes are pitiful enough (look at Peter), but its truly sad when they are children.
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Post by jaysoncesta on Apr 25, 2004 22:29:53 GMT -5
wow i was expecting something quite negative from you kolava...just guessing by your persona and all...::shrugs::
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Post by kalidarkstar on Apr 26, 2004 9:50:06 GMT -5
WHA!!! MY POOR BABY *huggles jayson mun to death*
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