it's about walk

[Nym Zeal]

it's about walk


it starts with beauty
ex
clamation. curves arch
in foot soles
sharp angles
of elbows

mathematic
or lyric or that
rhythmic onomatopoeia
word stamps

backWords braille out at
knee bend and navel

guard rail hair curl;
Temples turn in, ready,
go! to the jasmine oil

dot beneath shapely, salivate-ER ear
yes, it's all about, commas,
to seperate

cereal crumbs

but stay of the pattern
with your cells, indent of knuckle
finger hair

In shoulder freckles
how we look back.


Natasha Trinité <br>2003

[Kolava]

It's either really great or really terrible; it's hard to tell with abstract poetry-- but isn't that the whole point? If so, good job!

[Cherise]

It reminds me of e.e. cummings, just with more punctuation