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Haiku
Apr 30, 2004 10:11:08 GMT -5
Post by kalidarkstar on Apr 30, 2004 10:11:08 GMT -5
All alone Under the trees of the forst I dance
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Haiku
Apr 30, 2004 18:41:39 GMT -5
Post by jaysoncesta on Apr 30, 2004 18:41:39 GMT -5
::scratches his head:: well its kinda short but good..i think....
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Haiku
Apr 30, 2004 18:46:44 GMT -5
Post by Kolava on Apr 30, 2004 18:46:44 GMT -5
It's a fine poem, though haikus traditionally have a five/seven/five syllable scheme.
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Haiku
May 1, 2004 11:30:49 GMT -5
Post by Cherise on May 1, 2004 11:30:49 GMT -5
Ok.. How about..
I am all alone Beneath the foliage of trees In the woods I dance
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