|
Post by Stoic Soul on Apr 12, 2004 8:38:57 GMT -5
The coming of a storm, dark nights ahead Claps of thunder fill the sky The black night, filled with fear and dread As soldiers fight and die
A hopeless situation, death so near blood and bodies cover the ground No love lost, none left to shed a tear As men die without a sound
Tides of war crash over the land As demons come out and prey humans fight and die at the hand of creatures dark and fey
Yet hope glimmers through the night As the darkness fades away Hosts of angels join the fight To keep the demons at bay
Battles rage all over the world Humanitys survival the prize demons and angels, down both hurled dreadful noise their death-cries
Angels prevail in the end Demons killed, their bodies burned the hosts of light a godsend Into day, the night is turned
|
|
|
Post by Cherise on Apr 12, 2004 12:48:41 GMT -5
^_^ Nifty! - does the first comment dance -
|
|
|
Post by Erica on Apr 12, 2004 17:29:48 GMT -5
Wow, you make me envious of your talent, i wish i could write like that. You did a great job, i love it! you shoulder publish it.
|
|
|
Post by Erica on Apr 12, 2004 17:30:37 GMT -5
Oppsy! should*
|
|
|
Post by Stoic Soul on Apr 15, 2004 13:53:34 GMT -5
Really, you think so? Never though of publishing any of my poems. Didnt think they were that good. Anyway, thanks for the compliments
|
|