On the road to faerie land

[kali mun]

Laying there on the soft green grass

I watch the clouds pass by

And I see the big dragons dance

And the pixies fly.



We shall see them blossom and disappear

Mother goddesses and local genies

Fundamental spirits of water and air

Sirens and creatures of the sea



White does of the woods, vengeful Morgan’s

Grandmothers, spinners of destiny

Ladies of the snowy mountains

Selkies that lounge by the sea



The flora and the dream fae

The colored bird taking flight

The shadows of the day.

The rainbows of the night





They watch over childbirth

Rites of passage and first time love

Even though they are full of mirth

They are gentle like a dove



Leading reborn children to heaven  <br>
Through the Fields of reviving corn,

Taking refuge in a constellation

From vengeful creatures that cause a storm.



Now, at this moment when forgotten

Wishes may come to mind and be granted

It is time for the wanderer among the faeries to set out

On the road to faerie land



Laying there on the soft green grass

I watch the clouds pass by

Down the road to fairly land,

Watching the faeries fly.

[Cherise]

I like the imagery, but the rhythm really throws me off (normally I wouldn't say anything, but it looks like you were going for a specific rhythm in the first stanza, and then the rest of it just didn't follow anything specific).