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Feb 15, 2004 17:11:18 GMT -5
Post by Anonymous on Feb 15, 2004 17:11:18 GMT -5
And so we dance on the fine line of sanity and insanity Tip toeing Through reality and fantasy
Lost in a maze of uncertain play Caught up in a person Who is really who we want to be
Lost in a world of fantastic creatures Where we are a hero and death is not real
Dancing, Twirling With passionate play Ever crossing the line
Building hopes and dreams Sewn together in gossamer threads Finding we are caught in "THE Web".
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Feb 15, 2004 17:30:34 GMT -5
Post by Kolava on Feb 15, 2004 17:30:34 GMT -5
Shaky endings on the first two stanzas, and you didn't get any points for posting in secret, but it's a good topic and well focused.
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Feb 15, 2004 17:51:11 GMT -5
Post by Cherise on Feb 15, 2004 17:51:11 GMT -5
Less'ban anonymous posters. xD
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Feb 15, 2004 18:02:43 GMT -5
Post by Anonymous on Feb 15, 2004 18:02:43 GMT -5
Thank you for the pointers.
This is set up as a public board. If you wish me not to post here, then I will quit. All you have to do is ask.
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Feb 15, 2004 18:10:03 GMT -5
Post by Cherise on Feb 15, 2004 18:10:03 GMT -5
No, don't quit! But make a user name or something. Anonymous is so... cliche! - huggles - And I don't know if you're the same anonymous as another anonymous and then it's all confusing! -.- Well, it confuses me anyway.
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Feb 15, 2004 18:53:43 GMT -5
Post by Kolava on Feb 15, 2004 18:53:43 GMT -5
Also, you can't actually "quit" until you register.
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Feb 15, 2004 21:08:27 GMT -5
Post by anonymous on Feb 15, 2004 21:08:27 GMT -5
Then please let me rephrase.
If you wish me not to post on this board, let me know, I and I will not post here any more.
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Feb 16, 2004 0:28:06 GMT -5
Post by PaulAVincent on Feb 16, 2004 0:28:06 GMT -5
Post to your heart's content.
Sometimes writing is meant to be shared in private. Personally I will put my name with any work of art I've done simply because that's the way I am, whether or not people agree with a topic I present if I feel strong enough to say it I'll stand behind it. But I know alot of people who write poems and stories and don't want people to know it's them. It's perfectly fine.
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Feb 16, 2004 1:36:46 GMT -5
Post by Anonymous on Feb 16, 2004 1:36:46 GMT -5
Thank You
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Feb 16, 2004 3:44:14 GMT -5
Post by The Darkness on Feb 16, 2004 3:44:14 GMT -5
I liked it and you do not have to tell us who you are if you do not feel comfortable with telling us
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