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Life
Dec 13, 2003 17:01:20 GMT -5
Post by Mobius1 on Dec 13, 2003 17:01:20 GMT -5
Sadness washed away in a pure rain Life is good, no longer vain Death is replaced by life like love given by a wife Joy washes away every a sad day Hate is pushed far away The bonds that held the heart Are broken now, time for a new start
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Life
Dec 13, 2003 18:46:46 GMT -5
Post by Cherise on Dec 13, 2003 18:46:46 GMT -5
- Headcant - Well, it's not really my favorite of poems, it's ok though. ^^;
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Life
Dec 14, 2003 0:02:18 GMT -5
Post by princesssummer on Dec 14, 2003 0:02:18 GMT -5
its alright. i'm with the Hilton sis on this one.
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Life
Dec 14, 2003 0:20:20 GMT -5
Post by Kolava on Dec 14, 2003 0:20:20 GMT -5
I don't think it's the greatest poem ever, but I do applaud the author for use of rhyme and deviation from the standerd gothic angst that dominates contemporary poetry.
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Life
Dec 14, 2003 15:36:54 GMT -5
Post by princesssummer on Dec 14, 2003 15:36:54 GMT -5
ooowwwww... ::holds her head:: stop talking smart!!! UR KILLING ME!!!!
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Life
Dec 14, 2003 16:07:10 GMT -5
Post by Cherise on Dec 14, 2003 16:07:10 GMT -5
DOMINATE. - likes that word. -
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Life
Dec 15, 2003 7:53:21 GMT -5
Post by Mobius1 on Dec 15, 2003 7:53:21 GMT -5
Thanks for the compliment everyone. Ill try to put up more poems.
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Life
Dec 15, 2003 12:25:13 GMT -5
Post by LadyGelinaGrey on Dec 15, 2003 12:25:13 GMT -5
If you know anything about Darius ..you would understand that this poem means something. Go back and look at all the other ones that he has posted then come back and read this again. Then you tell me what you see.
::huggles Darius:: Nice job hun...
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Life
Dec 15, 2003 12:34:05 GMT -5
Post by Mobius1 on Dec 15, 2003 12:34:05 GMT -5
:is huggled:thanks Lina, I knew you would understand
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Life
Jan 14, 2004 6:10:01 GMT -5
Post by Maggie_Draken on Jan 14, 2004 6:10:01 GMT -5
::Smiles:: The best poetry is what we write for ourselves. Not what we write for others approval. If it touches someone then it is the icing on the cake.
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