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Post by kiakblackthorne on Jan 12, 2004 18:53:59 GMT -5
Fame's Call and Cost Still nights remember thy name. Whisper softly, Ever-dieing fame. Life lived in constant peril. No choice of how. No choice of when. Fortuna called and forced my beckoning anwser. To live in shadow or live forever? Unattainable fame from no surrender. Once more alone. Is it in wonder, as I pass on to glory or to retribution Whispers surround and follow into my ever restless slumber. I wrote this a few years ago for a poetry contest that The Eternal Trinity was having. I didn't even get a "good job." But I loved the poem and it has become my ... theme so you can say. Back when I had a choice to step up to control I chose to step back into the shadows. I kept thinking of Achilles in the underworld when Ulysses went to meet the heros that had fought and died in the Trojan war of Terran history. When asked if he could do it over again what he would have chose he said, " I would rather have lived a long life of quite simplicity then a short life of fame and glory." Ulysses never forgave himself for forcing him away from his family only to meet his death on the battle feild. I guess I kept thinking that is what would happen... ( Poem is curtesy of ME! Caroline Eikenberry. Please don't borrow this without permission. See other works by me at my webby. www.bathroomofdarkness.tk )
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Post by Warrior of the Myst on Jan 12, 2004 19:03:48 GMT -5
I love it. ;D
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Post by Cherise on Jan 12, 2004 19:17:28 GMT -5
Hm, I'm right in the middle of reading the Odyssey. And really, Achilles' death was not the fault of Ulysses, but the oath the men took to defend Menelaus and Helen, right? - le sigh -
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Post by kiakblackthorne on Jan 13, 2004 1:53:43 GMT -5
Achilles didn't want to go really.. they sort twisted his arm into going to the war. There he died... the scene is in the Odyesse and the death is in the Illiad.
But thank you!
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Post by Maggie_Draken on Jan 13, 2004 2:33:03 GMT -5
::Claps her hands like a proud mama::
I love this one. It has always spoken to me.
Go Care!
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Post by Cherise on Jan 13, 2004 21:13:57 GMT -5
Yeah, I don't think any of them wanted to run off into the Trojan War. Yep, yep, I knew that. ^_^ Damn Homer and his epics. - waves her fist -
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Post by Maggie_Draken on Jan 14, 2004 6:02:21 GMT -5
::Thinks the poem is just pretty. No matter the detail.::
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