Knight making rounds..

[auronfirstknight]

As he stood in the castle the fire lit, he stared out the window looking upon the fields. This half demonic knight not knowing his place in the kingdom. He thought that hes last thing to do in life was to die. But he looked to the good points of the castle. The friends..he smiled... he walked back to the fire. "Why do we still continue.." now since the change in his appearance he has questioned the ways of life. His mind wanders but yet his heart still stays in one place. His sword still stays in the place of protecting everyone in the castle. But he cannot figure out what he must do. "Who controlls the outcome...who makes the problem..." he was quite alone in the main hall just rembling on as questions would come to his mind. But he knew in do time everything will be solved. The castle quiet he waited for the next stranger to walk through the front gate. He walked to the window yet again. Seeing a figure walking on the field he paused. Wondering what it was, he did nothing in case of it was a newcomer to the castle he just watched "I guess I shall do another round of the castle.." and the night continued for the 8 ball of the group now was in disbelief of life itself. But the one question would stay in his mind...Who was in the fields?

[Kolava]

An interesting post, but I'm a bit curious if you were trying to tie it to another? Is the "person in the fields" Peter? You should be more specific next time so that your posts will make sense even when seperated from others. Also, as a word of a advice, you would benefit greatly by investing in some grammar. It's really not so hard once you get the hang of it, and it does wonders for the clarity of your sentences. (Until, of course, you go and make it hard to read again with all sorts of interjections like I do)